Dear children,
We learnt more about writing stories! We watched the story of Redhill and we retold the story in our own words.
We used a writing template to organise our writing. Some of us even volunteered to share our work! Arfan, Aloysius, Shirlyn, Rayyan, Grace, Jovan and Guang Hon did a great job speaking in front of the class. I hope to see more of you taking that extra step forward!
I'm also pleasantly surprised with Chengze's work. Although he did not follow the template closely (guess he needed more space!), he managed to write a really nice and complete story. Great job, Chengze! You can do well if you put your heart in it!
This is what he wrote (I have yet to edit his work):
We will continue working on our writing soon, see you tomorrow!
Sincerely,
Mrs Soh
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