Sharing with you Alysa's composition... Which are the good words and phrases you can pick up from her writing?
Things to take note:
1. Use the past tense for your story (Unless you have speech. Use present tense for speech.)
2. Put in full stops. Some of you wrote one whole paragraph without any full stop. -.-"
3. Read your story carefully. Does it make sense? Some of your stories mixed up the idea of the boys being friends and then they suddenly have the same mother.
Let's work on these for now. See you tomorrow!
Sincerely,
Mrs Soh
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